托福考试作文题目：

Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion， what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福考试作文参考分析：

有时候为了成功是应该冒一些必要的风险，为了成功详尽的计划也是必需的，但是我认为为了成功，坚持是较重要的。

托福考试作文范文参考 ：

Once upon time， a man pleaded a piece of land from a tribe chief. The chief gave the man a pole and told him that if he could insert the pole in a place from which he could come back before the sunset， the land between tribe station and the pole would belong to him. The man was so greedy that he exhausted to death on the way back. From this story we can see that although the man had his goal and action， he had no plan. A good plan is essential for success. It can quantify the task and make it possible for a man to arrange his time effectively.

First， by means of planning a man quantifies his task. He divides his final target into several periodic ones. Thus， he could average the pressure and see his progress during each period. A good plan encourages a man to fulfill his destination positively rather than passively. Actually， all successful people have their careful plans. For example， an excellent student must have a study schedule that include how to learn new knowledge and how to review old contents; an outstanding businessman needs a rational marketing plan that defines the best avenues to reach his target customers and then assigns a reasonable budget to his efforts. If one could execute his periodic target successfully every time， he could easily achieve his ultimate target. More significantly， during this process a man will acquire a lot of qualities that are essential to success.

Secondly， the advantage of good planning is that one can dispose his time and energy more effectively. It occurs very often in life that one should do a lot of things simultaneously. To take care of his children， to work， to spend enough time with his family and friends， only by a careful planning can a man accomplishhis several targets in a short time.

Let us come back to the former story. If the man were a coward he would always fear that he could not come back before the sunset. The answer must be that he got much less than what he could have. Therefore success， to some extent， needs risk. But I think a careful plan is more important because it changes success into a routine and it helps a man use his time more effectively.

下面来为大家盘点几个影响托福写作成绩的问题。

托福写作常见问题有：

1、托福作文思路打不开，或者观点太武断，想当然的把自己认为的事情当成事实;

2、用英文表达中文思想不流畅，用时过多，甚至有中式英语。长句运用不熟练还特别喜欢用长句;

3、语法问题比较多，如词性误用、时态不正确、主谓不一致等。

对于这些问题，下面小航将会给大家简单地介绍一下它们的分类解决方法：

1、关于思路

同学们的两种习惯性思维方式——“一边倒”和辩证分析，现在我就解析一下这两种思维方式的利弊，顺便说一句，推荐使用第二种。

“一边倒”的好处是思考时间相对来说会比较短，不用想太多太复杂，分观点不会冲突。但是容易出现上文提到的“太武断”问题。而且也限制思路、限制发挥。而辩证分析更符合国外critical thinking的思维模式，思维的广度和深度更吸引评卷老师。但要小心控制审题时间，提升打字速度，以免没办法在规定时间内把自己的思想表达完全。

2、关于中式思维和中式英语：

英语基础不佳的同学初期可通过背诵好句子来培养语感。但这只是初期的工作，之后还是要渐渐学会独立，练一练中英对译。

要知道语言都是思维的外部表现，归根结底还是反映你脑中的思想。所以想要写出正统的英语而非chinglish，还是要学会从构思开始就直接在脑中构成英语句子。很多同学喜欢先想好中文内容，然后逐句翻译，这是很容易出问题的。

3、关于本不该丢分的语法错误：

新托福写作中的语法错误一方面与你的英语功底有关，一方面也与你的写作坏习惯有关。

这里涉及到英语基础的情况就不谈了，大家自行把好语法关，但一些分明有语言能力却出错丢分的情况不得不提。在写作时，首先自己的审查必不可少，时间再紧也要预留检查的时间。其次不可过度沉迷长难句，没有把握的句子还是不写为妙。另外较重要的是，站在阅读者的立场来看待文章，很多主谓不一致或缺少句子成分，都是考生自己觉得心知肚明，却没有考虑到要对他人交代清楚。

以上仅供参考，详情可咨询新航道学校，小航在这里等你。