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雅思写作如何做到正确审题

作者: 2024-03-09 11:34 来源:石家庄编辑
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雅思学习,今天分享的是“雅思写作如何做到正确审题”。

审题是雅思写作的重中之重,一旦出现错误,后续写作就不再具有重要意义。今天我们就来给带说一说雅思写作如何审题,只有在雅思写作中做到正确审题,才能够开始之后的创作。

5月20日考了这么一个题目:

Countries with long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在解析中跟大家提到,这个题目前面这句: "Countries with long average working time are more economically successful", 是题目的观点,需要在文章中进行回应(表达同意不同意并论证)。此句话比较容易判断属于观点,出错的同学应该不多。

但5月13日题目就稍微难了一些:

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

在解析中跟大家提到,这个题目的第 一句话 "Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements" 同样是是观点,需要在文章中回应,才能获得理想的TR分数。

那是不是只要有类似这样的两句话,就都是观点,都需要在文章中回应呢?不是,问题的难点就因此而生。

今天我们来详细展开这个问题,从简单的开始:

题1:Too much money is spent looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think we should knock old buildings down and build new modern ones. To what extent to you agree or disagree.

此题目中,前面标成浅绿色的这句话需要这文章中专门回应吗(在中间段专门论述)?我们在写作团专门讲过,不用,因为some people think之前是背景,some people think 之后是观点,题目问同意还是不同意,只是针对观点提问。

所以,some people think这几个词很关键,是我们判断的重要参考。比如下题:

In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that it is the government's responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

同理,题目中浅绿色的这句话不需要回应,因为在some people think 之前。

可是有些时候,出题人是大大的坏,题目中没有some people think. 比如下面这题:

题2:Wild animals have no place in the 21st century,so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

那么这个题目中前面这句话要在写作中回应吗?答案是要的,因为它是观点,此题就是我们在写作团专门讲过的观点包含两个部分。此题网络上有考官范文,大家一搜便知。

再看下面这题:

题3:More and more people could now access information from computers and other electronic devices. Therefore, there is no need to use printed books, magazines, or newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

前面这句话需要在文章中回应吗?答案是不需要,因为这句话是事实性的背景。

再看下面这题:

题4:A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

前面这句话需要在文章中回应吗?答案是需要,因为这句话是观点,此题有雅思官方范文,明确写了一段回应了第 一句话。

题5:Some professionals, such as teachers and doctors make a greater contribution to society, so they should be paid more than sport athletes and entertainment stars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

前面这句话需要在文章中回应吗?答案是需要,因为这句话是观点。

看到这里,大部分同学会有三个反应:

1.Oh, my god, 以前从来没想过还要回应前面那句话,从来都只是回应第二句话。

2. 一会儿要回应,一会儿不回应,有点晕了。

3. 回应不回应的依据到底是什么?

依据就是这句话到底是事实(fact) 还是观点(opinion)? 如果是fact不需要回应,opinion就需要回应。

那么怎么区别fact or opinion? AI是这么说的。

此处不展开讲事实和观点区分,大家可以随手百度一下。不过,虽然网上教大家区别的方式一大堆,有很多同学还是判断不了?

题3中:More and more people could now access information from computers and other electronic devices. 这句话还是很容易判断出来是事实而不是观点,所以不需要回应。

题4中:A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. 

这句话不太好判断,有些同学认为是观点,有些认为是事实,还好有官方范文,所以也不好争论什么了。

可题5中这句话:Some professionals, such as teachers and doctors make a greater contribution to society. 

我说是观点,很多同学说这是事实,因为没有官方范文,争的就差点打起来了。然后我们让AI判断了一下。

AI判断为观点,所以是需要在文章中回应的。

总结一下,某句话到底是否需要在文章中回应,取决于它到底是观点还是背景,这需要自己的主观判断。难点就在于此!!!

有以下几点经验大家需要把握:

1. 一定要知道,有些时候题目是需要回应多个部分的,就是我们在写作团专门讲的观点包含两个部分。有相当多的同学不清楚这点。

2. 如果题目有some people think就简单了,之前是fact,之后才是opinion.

3. 如果判断不了怎么办? 曾经官方的考官说那就都写上,这样相对更好。

4. 题目如果是because因果关系,一定记得两个部分都要回应,比如剑15T2这题:In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

5. 不要焦虑,这种复杂情况一年也就那么2次左右,碰到的概率比较小。

较后再看一个题目:

Men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

此题中Men and women have different qualities到底是观点还是背景呢?

AI是这样回答的:the statement is partially a fact and partially an opinion. 好一个小机灵鬼,半是事实半是观点。

还好这个题目中有some peole think,原题是这样的:

Some people think men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

关于审题中观点包含两个部分其实还有其他一些注意事项,各位参加写作团的同学跟着课程内容就好,此处不在展开了。

较后:祝你在雅思中遇到的每一个题目都有some people think.

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