常见SAT写作考试错误

　　1. The tomatoes at this fruit stand are Umuch more plump, fresh and tasty than the fruit stand located in the lobby of the buildingU in which I work. much more plump, fresh and  tasty than those sold at the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building.

　　点评：这个句子中比较了多个项目。在多个比较中可以用“much more/less adj+adj+adj+...”的形式。

　　同时注意比较的对象(西红柿和西红柿比)。

　　常见SAT写作考试错误2. UAlthough we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish a little.We opposed the program, despite its  bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.

　　点评：句子原意为“尽管该计划如何如何好，我们反对它，因为。。。。。。”先弄清句意。表原因还是用更简单的“because”。

　　常见SAT写作考试错误3. The U tiger, a relative of the B tiger, has been described as Uthe strongest tiger and also the most peaceful of them.U the strongest and yet the most  peaceful of tigers.

　　点评：和前面一题类似。

　　常见SAT写作考试错误4. While several baseball teams have tried to supplant the Yankees as the dominant team in baseball, Utheir inability has been unableU to win even half as  many WS as the Yankees have won in the past one hundred years. they have been unable CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States.

　　点评：平行结构，时态，句式一致。CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States.

　　常见SAT写作考试错误5. UIf we compare the number of alligators with the Gila monsters over time, we see that the alligatorU is in decline. A comparison overtime of the numbers of  alligators and Gila monsters shows that alligators are

　　点评：直接用“comparison”更简洁。同时还是要(老问题了)注意比较的对象。数量必须和数量比。

　　常见SAT写作考试错误6. The price of gold has been influenced by continued inflation and Ubecause people have lost faithU in the dollar. loss of faith.

　　点评：平行结构。